21 Mar

How to Appeal a USC Transfer Rejection Letter

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For USC transfers, appeals are accepted through informal submissions. However, that doesn't mean your statement should be informally written. Successful appeal letters are calculated, strategic, and compelling in addressing the underlying deficiencies of your Common Application. 

 

The "Informal" USC Transfer Appeal Process:

USC transfer appeals hold a special place in our hearts at College Zoom. Back in the spring of 2010, a USC transfer appeal was the first-ever appeal that we helped a student attempt. Its success allowed a girl to remain in Los Angeles and stay with her boyfriend. The following year, we helped her boyfriend transfer into USC, too, with a 3.1 transfer GPA, without the need for an appeal. Now they're married. 🙂

Unlike USC's freshman appeal process, where formal submission and formatting instructions are provided through the online portal, the appeal process for USC transfers is informal and less defined.

How a Transfer Appeal Works:

As of April 18, 2019, a section of USC's website (which is no longer available) instructed:

"USC does not have a formal appeal process for transfer applicants. If you wish to appeal our decision, please email your Admission Counselor a statement as to why you believe your application should be reconsidered."

Don't be so quick to send that email. The "informal" nature of your appeal's submission guidelines does not mean that your actual appeal argument should be any less thoughtful, strategic, or developed. Rather than writing a statement that emotionally professes how much USC is your dream school, your appeal should compellingly address the unique deficiencies in your original Common Application.

What Should I Write About?

You'll want to re-evaluate everything in the Common Application you submitted. USC is evaluating the extent to which you strongly embody the qualities of ideal USC students. Yes, things that have happened since you applied are obviously new and may be compelling. However, contrary to popular belief, the new information that strengthens your candidacy can actually pertain to things that occurred before you submitted your USC application. In this instance, you're introducing information that is "old" to you, making it new to the admissions officers. Additionally, giving information you previously shared a new characterization isn't the same as repeating something you previously discussed in your Common Application.

Length Limit

Appeals exceeding 1 page are strongly and vehemently discouraged by the admissions office. Nonetheless, we've helped a surprising number of students write longer appeals that have succeeded. Tread extremely carefully. Exceeding the 1 page limit is living dangerously on an admission's officer's borrowed time, and most students who exceed the 1 page limit are actually inefficient, overly stylistic and descriptive writers who will present poorly.

The only justifiable reason to exceed 1 page is if the complexity of the facts warrant additional untangling (caution: that doesn't mean laundry-listing). Longer, successful appeal letters are still a fraction of the size students felt they needed to convey their message. For example, the longest USC appeal we've ever had succeed was nearly 2 pages long. The appeal did not move the page margins out to maximum positions, use a super tiny font size, insert pictures, or employ any other creative hacks. Hint: stay away from these tactics. We first helped a student develop a draft that became 5 pages long, and then condensed it to 1 and ¾ pages without losing the 5 page version's detail, key visceral descriptions, and power. Think of every compound sentence pulling the intellectual weight of 2 to 3 normal sentences. Every word was engineered to have an express purpose.

That level of word-smithing will allow the vast majority of compelling appeal arguments to fit into 1 page, portraying yourself as a strong, powerful thinker. That same level of extreme word-smithing is necessary to keep a reader's attention if you have to exceed the 1 page limit. Writing potently, in the most compact form, takes time. However, quality beats speed to success.

The First Step

Begin by identifying and prioritizing the most important deficiencies from your original application that you'll address in your USC appeal letter. Remember that even long letters are extremely condensed versions that are forced to exclude information you'll deem to be relevant and important. We can help you develop your best argument by analyzing your application and cross-examining you with the right questions to explore your angles. Then, we can help you word smith and condense your strongest messages into their most concise forms, to fit within the 1 page limit and ensure your letter is viewed in the most appropriate and acceptable way.

We Can Help You:

A College Zoom counselor can walk you through the appeal process step-by-step. First, we'll analyze your Common Application and USC Supplement Application in a session to identify the right deficiencies that your appeal must prioritize and address. Then, we'll guide you in how to word your explanations in the most compelling way. When we’re done, you’ll not only feel better, but you’ll know that you’re submitting the absolute strongest case for reconsideration that you can make.

Our appeal sessions are sold in 1.5 hour time spots ($427.50 each). Most students need only one or two sessions to perfect their appeal letter and can submit their appeals within days. Strong writers may only need one meeting. Contact us to find out more about how we can help you. We are committed to keeping your dream alive.

 

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